Sci-Fi gamebook thing by Zorgee

I created this with a fresh mind, no copyright infringement is intended and any resemblance to a real life person or persons is coincidental. There's probably some more malarkey that I have not covered but I think those are the essentials.
ANYWAY
If anyone would be kind as to read this and provide their thoughts I'd be quite happy :D
be as brutal as you like >:D