I think this story has the potential to be Fantastic If you worked on it a little more. I am always up for helping you and good luck. When you give out a really good story you will feel really good aout yoursef :) Also I said this in the comments but I loved how you used my warrior cat RP name fernstar when I do roblox
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Surreal
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