Shrunken at the club, the GOAT. I will offer my constructive criticism.
The biggest thing I personally dislike is the fact that you are forced as a woman, and also the size is like, a bit too small even though I prefer small size tbh. Grain of sand to like quarter inch size does it for me but this is like a fraction of that apparently.
I know quest games arent a cakewalk to make, but a few things I would add if I were able to: an opportunity to switch genders of the main character, though im not sure how that would work. I would also add the ability to climb things with the climb button etc if you have the required tools in your inventory, without having to manually type out a command. The FAQ is a life saver for this, but i know its possible to make it so you dont require commands. One more thing is a death counter, like to mark each death scene by number so that way I can mess around until I’ve found all of them and i can say ive conquered the game.
Also personally I believe if anyone were to ever be this small, it would take a helluva lot of force to crush you, considering how compact your bones and other organs must be after shrinking THIS small. It would take a lot more force than it often does to kill you, and I also reckon fall damage would be non-existent at a size like this. Think about it. Like is there any bug on the planet at any size that even gets slightly shaken or hurt by a fall from any height? Idk maybe I’m overthinking it but regardless 5 star game greatest of all time and has inspired others to make these size games as well. It’s also added some words to my vocabulary for my own writing style, which ive noticed we have a similar style of writing, yours being a bit more colorful.
As for the writing itself, impeccable. Little to no grammar issues or typos. The immersion rarely breaks other than the occasional silly dialogue options which I don’t mind at all really. One particular fetish that isn’t covered is nipple related deaths. Unless I missed something, there are none, and I wish there was but beggars cant be choosers i guess lmao
If you ever log back on this site and see this, you’re the goat and i hope youre doing well for yourself out there
People saying its a copy of the club game, no not really. The author clearly learned a lot from the club game but its a pool not a club so calm down ur not the main character
Aside from the game is alright, the death counter system is a good touch to see what content you missed (i cant find death 18 lmao) but the game is poorly made aside from the writing. The default “look at” and “take” button descriptions are still there for many of the things but i mean its sort of lacking creativity
One more thing, for the people complaining about the “racism” no its not racism its immersion. Being stuck in a white girls sock would be drastically different than a filipino worker’s shoe. Its immersion not racism
That being said 3 stars for the creativity but due to the laziness of the game i cant go any higher
